People always dream about to see other countries. Seeing other countries comes them interesting. This fact has a lot of reasons such as learning other countries, being familiar with other food, and making foreign friends. As for me, if I have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks, I would choose England. The reasons for it are that I'm crazy about english football, I like England's weather, and I want to be familiar with English food.
To begin with, I really like English football because brits are know everything about football. Both players and audience are aware of that football is a game that should be played well. So, players play their game fantastically and audience enjoy while they're watching the game. Audience watch the game as they're in theater. So, there is not so much terrorism in stadium. It makes football more beautiful and makes me to love football more.
Secondly, although I haven't been in England, I like it's weather a lot. It's always rainy which makes me happy. Walking in rainy days has a different meaning on me. It provides me to understand the life.
Finally, there are a lot of people who claim that english kitchen is poor and I wonder if it is true or not. If not, I wonder that how they taste. Maybe, I've eaten English food. But, I want to eat them in England in rainy days.
In conclusion, it's my dream to visit England. So, if I was given a chance to visit a foreign country for two weeks, I would choose England without thinking.
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This would be better if you shorten your introduction paragraph. Moreover, please be careful about the letters you used. "İ" is not acceptable in English as you know; and, finally, in conclusion, you could have summarized or paraphrased your topic sentences in one or two sentences.
ReplyDeleteI think your essay is good in general.You sum up your opinions about going abroad in introduction part well.But you should give more examples.Because going abroad is not a simple thing.But your essay has a meaningful coherence.Also paragraph style is good.Despite these good aspects in my opinion you should change final paragraph.Because it seems equal to introduction.All in all, I had a nice impact from your writing.Thank you...
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