Introduction-Thesis Statement: I have never thought that I have some characters others don't know. But, recently, I have realized that I have a lot of characters that was hidden in my mind. Maybe, others know them or I'm not aware of being known by others. I'll share three of them which are that I love cigarettes very much, I esteem people who do so to me and I don't like to share my secrets.
Body Paragraph- 1: I love cigarettes and smoking.
*I don't think that I could live without smoking.
*Actually, I should break up it because it's unhealthy. But, I don't want to torture myself.
*It is necessary for me like how the water is necessary to continue my life.
*I guess I'll smoke until I die.
Body Paragraph-2: I esteem people who do so to me.
*If people don't like me, how can I respect them?
*Everything should be done oppositely.
*But, I believe that if I respect them firstly, they will answer back.
Body Paragraph-3: I don't like to share my secrets.
*They are all belong to me and I like to keep them in my mind.
*I'm afraid of my secrets being shared by people whom I tell my specials.
In conclusion, because of these reasons that I have mentioned above, I feel myself different.
Baygeldi, your outline looks nice, too; but, please do not announce your topic in the introduction part as "I'll share three of them". Good luck with your essay. By the way, I couldn't see your first week blog entry which should be the introduction.
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